It certainly is a unique idea that you have here. It looks a little one-dimensional though. I would advise more attention to colour and shading, to add depth to this character. And the green fluid doesn't quite look natural to me. Fluid is tricky to pull off, but a good way to approach it is with fractals. They don't have to be precise, but they work well.
Unfortunately, I'm not that great of an artist, so there's not much in the way of advice that I can give you. However, I recommend starting an art thread in the art forum here, if you haven't already. Lots of great criticism comes from doing just that.
Ok! Thanx 4 the advice =) I know that itÂ´s hard to give good advice. I too have a hard time telling people good things to improve. But moste of the time itÂ´s just nice having someone looking at your art. And i will try to implement those things you told me =)
I like it.
I really like these character things you do. I'll probably add a new one to my user image every time I level up. Keep going man!
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